Psyringe - added and/or updated flavor texts for lots of decks. Each decks has a flavor text now. Replaced references to out-of-game material like "8/8 creature", "aggro deck", or real-life quotes, to maintain artistic consistency and not disrupt a player's immersion into the fantasy world. I tried to use a wide range of diverse texts (descriptive, taunting, bizarre, comical). Feedback and suggestions for improvement are welcome.

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@@ -1,5 +1,10 @@
 #NAME: Good Knight
 #DESC:Time to sleep.
 #DESC:
 #DESC:Beware! The knights have come!
 #DESC:Inspired by their anthem,
 #DESC:they embarked on a crusade
 #DESC:to defend their honor.
 Crusade (RV)                 * 2 #
 Swords to Plowshares (ICE)   * 3 #
 Leonin Skyhunter (MRD)       * 4 #
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 #DESC:In the castle of Bant,
 #DESC:the call to battle
 #DESC:echoes the prayer of Asha.
-#DESC:Prepare to face Bant's light
+#DESC:Prepare to face Bant's light!
 #4x unsummon
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@@ -1,12 +1,13 @@
 #NAME:Deep Blue
-#DESC:Are you sure you want
+#DESC:"Are you sure you want to
-#DESC:to put that 8/8 into play?
+#DESC: send that mighty creature
 #DESC: into the battle?
 #DESC:
-#DESC:You realize it might end up
+#DESC: You realize it might end up
-#DESC:fighting against you, right?
+#DESC: fighting against you, right?
 #DESC:
-#DESC:It's not like I did not warn
+#DESC: It's not like I did not warn
-#DESC:you with that Boomerang.
+#DESC: you with that Boomerang ..."
 #Blue Deck, with Persusasion
 #24 Islands
 158237
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 #NAME:Faeries
-#DESC:Be warned, those are not butterflies...
+#DESC:Be warned, those are not butterflies!
-#DESC:Or the dangerous kind.
+#DESC:Or ... the dangerous kind.
 #Plain blue deck
 #4 x Control Magic, {2}{U}{U}, Enchant creature
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@@ -1,7 +1,8 @@
 #Plain white deck
 #NAME:Justice
-#DESC:Defending law with an army of zealous
+#DESC:Defending law with an army
-#DESC:followers, every criminal shall be punished
+#DESC:of zealous followers,
 #DESC:every criminal shall be punished
 #DESC:with the wrath of the just.
 #4x Crusade,{W}{W}, Enchantment, all white creatures +1/+1
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@@ -1,7 +1,8 @@
 #NAME:Taiga
 #DESC:The forces of fire and nature unite.
 #DESC:
-#DESC:Can you withstand their combined fervor?
+#DESC:Can you withstand
 #DESC:their combined fervor?
 #2x Cockatrice
 1238
 1238
@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
 #DESC:The night falls down, 
 #DESC:the trouble begins.
 #DESC:The specter of evil,
-#DESC:will bring you back,
+#DESC:will bring you back
-#DESC:to black !
+#DESC:to black!
 #4x Bad Moon,{1}{B}, Enchantment, all black creature gets +1/+1
 1144
 1144
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 #NAME:Burning
 #DESC:Better be prepared, 
 #DESC:to burn the midnight oil.
-#DESC:The goblin brashness ,
+#DESC:The goblin brashness
 #DESC:will make you boil.
-#DESC:And you will end, 
+#DESC:And you will end 
-#DESC:burning with a low flame..
+#DESC:burning with a low flame ...
 #2 x Bloodmark Mentor
 142062
 142062
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 #NAME:Giants!
 #DESC:It's actually very hard to miss a giant.
-#DESC:you don't even have to aim your blow well.
+#DESC:You don't even have to aim your blow well.
 #DESC:The hard part
 #DESC:is to get into striking range.
 #Mogg Fanatic
@@ -1,10 +1,11 @@
 #NAME:Lafiel
-#DESC: A mostly green, half elf deck controlled 
+#DESC:Meet the army of the influential
-#DESC: by an influental elf-princess called Lafiel.
+#DESC:elven princess Lafiel.
-#DESC: Don't be fooled by the beauty of the elves 
+#DESC:Don't be fooled by their beauty
-#DESC: or you lose for sure! 
+#DESC:or you will lose
-#DESC: (Wagic 0.81 Deck & Avatar by Nakano)
+#DESC:more than just your mind!
 #(Wagic 0.81 Deck & Avatar by Nakano)
 #v0.1 / 01.09.2009
 # Initial release
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 #DESC:challenge just one 
 #DESC:champion of Goldmeadow,
 #DESC:and you will face 
-#DESC:the entire cla-chan !
+#DESC:the entire cla-chan!
 #4x Glorious Anthem, {1}{W}{W}, Enchantment, Creatures you control get +1/+1
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@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
 #DESC:United against the terrible
 #DESC:Phyrexian Fate,
 #DESC:there is no time for dispute
-#DESC:or rivalries,
+#DESC:or rivalries
-#DESC:in Eladamri and Gerarrd's army
+#DESC:in Eladamri and Gerrard's army
 #2x Black Vise
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 1097
@@ -1,17 +1,14 @@
 #NAME:Elfball
-#DESC:"Peace is not a relationship of nations.
+#DESC:An endless stream
-#DESC: It is a condition of mind brought about
+#DESC:of elvish warriors
-#DESC: by a serenity of soul. Peace is not
+#DESC:will overwhelm you,
-#DESC: merely the absence of war. It is also
+#DESC:powered by an unceasing
-#DESC: a state of mind. Lasting peace can come
+#DESC:supply of mana.
 #DESC: only to peaceful people."
 #DESC:                                    (Jawaharlal Nehru)
 #DESC:
-#DESC:Green, aggro-combo deck
+#DESC:Flee!
-#DESC:capable of generating huge amount
+#DESC:
-#DESC:of mana and an endless stream
+#DESC:You have no chance!
-#DESC:of elvish warriors!
+
 #DESC:v1.2 2009 09 17
 Llanowar Elves (M10) *4
 Wellwisher (ONS) *4
 Elvish Vanguard (ONS) *4
@@ -1,6 +1,8 @@
 #NAME:Angelism
-#DESC:White, enchantment-based deck.
+#DESC:An army of angels
-#DESC:v1.1 2009 09 01
+#DESC:will sweep through your defenses
 #DESC:while all your forces can do
 #DESC:is watch and gape in awe.
 Angelic Chorus (10E) *3
 Honor of the Pure (M10) *4
 Kitchen Finks (SHM) *4
@@ -1,11 +1,8 @@
 #NAME:Jihad
-#DESC:Mono-White deck with cheap,
+#DESC:They may look weak
-#DESC:effective creatures and
+#DESC:and barely present,
-#DESC:many pump effects.
+#DESC:but if you let them grow
-#DESC:Designed as a tribute to
+#DESC:they will crush your army.
 #DESC:the Jihad card from
 #DESC:Arabian Nights!
 #DESC:v1.0 2009 09 16
 Crusade (RV) *4
 Glorious Anthem (10E) *4
 Honor of the Pure (M10) *4
@@ -1,8 +1,9 @@
 #NAME:Spectral Rack
-#DESC:Mono black deck with
+#DESC:"We will clear your mind
-#DESC:disruption and good
+#DESC: until nothing is left.
-#DESC:removal.
+#DESC: And we will grow stronger
-#DESC:v1.0 2009 09 17
+#DESC: as you keep losing
 #DESC: your thoughts."
 The Rack (RV) *4
 Doom Blade (M10) *4
 Last Gasp (RAV) *4
@@ -1,14 +1,9 @@
 #NAME:Kobold Overlord
 #
-#DESC: Creature's Decks 1:
+#DESC:"You may think we are weak
-#DESC: "The deck that a Kobold Overlord
+#DESC: But we are many
-#DESC: would (and could) assemble."
+#DESC: And sometimes we can hire
-#DESC: (v1.07)
+#DESC: A powerful mercenary!"
 #DESC:
 #DESC:You may think we are weak
 #DESC:But we are many
 #DESC:And sometimes we can hire
 #DESC:A powerful mercenary
 #
 Mountain (10E)              *20
 Kher Keep (TSP)             *2 # produces kobold tokens
@@ -1,11 +1,13 @@
 #NAME:Might Sliver
 #
-#DESC: Creature's Decks 2:
+#DESC:Beware! Beware!
-#DESC: "The deck that a Might Sliver
+#DESC:They are everywhere!
-#DESC: would (and could) assemble."
+#DESC:Even in the air
-#DESC: (v1.01)
+#DESC:and under the ground.
-#DESC:
+#DESC:The whole world has turned
-#DESC:The Hive reaches your doorstep ...
+#DESC:into a squirming mass
 #DESC:of these small, yet dangerous
 #DESC:... things ...
 #
 #
@@ -1,13 +1,8 @@
 #NAME:Master of Ether
 #
-#DESC: Creature's Decks 3:
+#DESC:"Surrounded by the things I built
 #DESC: "The deck that a Master of Etherium
 #DESC: would (and could) assemble"
 #DESC: (v1.01)
 #DESC:
 #DESC: Surrounded by the things I built
 #DESC: my power will grow
-#DESC: boundlessly
+#DESC: boundlessly."
 #
 Master of Etherium (ALA) *4  # gets stronger with every artifact
@@ -1,10 +1,7 @@
 #NAME:Bad Dreams
-#DESC:Vision without action is a daydream.
+#DESC:If you ever thought
-#DESC:Action without vision is a nightmare.
+#DESC:  that YOU had bad dreams ...
-#DESC:
+#DESC:Wait until you meet these.
 #DESC:Japanese Proverb
 #DESC:
 #DESC:v1.0 2009 10 01
 Black Vise (RV) *1
 Wheel of Fortune (RV) *1
 Howling Mine (M10) *4
@@ -1,14 +1,9 @@
 #NAME:Ball Lightning
 #
-#DESC: Creature's Decks 6:
+#DESC:"You are nothing
 #DESC: "The deck that a Ball Lightning
 #DESC: would (and could) assemble"
 #DESC: (v1.01)
 #DESC:
 #DESC: You are nothing
 #DESC: But more fuel
 #DESC: For my insatiable
-#DESC: Rage
+#DESC: Rage!"
 #
 Ball Lightning (M10)        *4
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 #NAME:Plateau
-#DESC:In the highland of Borros
+#DESC:In the highland of Boros
 #DESC:Angels, elementals and goblins 
 #DESC:are preparing for battle.
 #DESC:Beware, the crusade is coming...
@@ -1,16 +1,11 @@
 #NAME:Undead Lords
 #
-#DESC: Creature's Decks 7:
+#DESC:"Can you smell the sweet perfume
 #DESC: "The deck that a Lord of the Undead
 #DESC: would (and could) assemble"
 #DESC: (v1.02)
 #DESC:
 #DESC: Can you smell the sweet perfume
 #DESC: Of festering flesh and rotting bones?
 #DESC:
 #DESC: Rejoice if you like it
 #DESC: Because soon, soon
-#DESC: You will be part of my army.
+#DESC: You will be part of my army."
 #
 Lord of the Undead (10E) *4  # strengthens and raises zombies
@@ -1,10 +1,5 @@
 #NAME:Zuberi's Flock
 #
 #DESC: Creature's Decks 8:
 #DESC: "The deck that Zuberi, Golden Feather,
 #DESC: would (and could) assemble"
 #DESC: (v1.01)
 #DESC:
 #DESC: Winged fighters
 #DESC: for honor and justice
 #DESC: cross the chasm
@@ -1,13 +1,8 @@
 #NAME:Viashino Warrior
 #
-#DESC: Creature's Decks :
+#DESC:"With claws and swords and flames
 #DESC: "The deck that a Viashino Warrior
 #DESC: would (and could) assemble"
 #DESC: (v1.03)
 #DESC:
 #DESC: With claws and swords and flames
 #DESC: we fiercely protect
-#DESC: those we revere
+#DESC: those we revere"
 Viashino Slasher (RAV)         *4 # cheap Viashino
 Viashino Slaughtermaster (CFX) *4 # cheap Viashino
@@ -1,17 +1,12 @@
 #NAME:Heartmender
 #
-#DESC: Creature's Decks 10:
+#DESC:"No matter who
 #DESC: "The deck that a Heartmender
 #DESC: would (and could) assemble"
 #DESC: (v1.01)
 #DESC:
 #DESC: No matter who
 #DESC: No matter what
 #DESC: We heal.
 #DESC: The good and the bad
 #DESC: The calm and the mad
 #DESC: The live and the dead
-#DESC: We heal.
+#DESC: We heal."
 Heartmender (SHM)         *4 # continuously removes -1/-1 counters
 #                            # from all others
@@ -1,16 +1,11 @@
 #NAME:Fairy Archmage
 #
-#DESC: Creature's Decks 11:
+#DESC:"Now we're here
 #DESC: "The deck that a Glen Elendra Archmage
 #DESC: would (and could) assemble"
 #DESC: (v1.01)
 #DESC:
 #DESC: Now we're here
 #DESC: Now we're there
 #DESC: Now we're gone
 #DESC: Now we're back
 #DESC:
-#DESC: But what happened to your defenses?
+#DESC: But what happened to your defenses?"
 Glen Elendra Archmage (EVE) *4 # ability is currently buggy ...
@@ -1,16 +1,11 @@
 #NAME:Snake Pit
 #
-#DESC: Creature's Decks 12:
+#DESC:"Ssalute our ssinuossity
-#DESC: "The deck that an Orochi Sustainer
+#DESC: Love our lithenesss
 #DESC: would (and could) assemble"
 #DESC: (v1.02)
 #DESC:
 #DESC: Salute our sinuosity
 #DESC: Love our litheness
 #DESC: Enjoy our embrace
 #DESC:
-#DESC: Care for a kiss?
+#DESC: Care for a kisss?
-#DESC: Soon you will sleep ...
+#DESC: Ssoon you will ssleep ..."
 Orochi Sustainer (CHK)           *3 # Orochi Snake Shaman
 Sachi, Daughter of Seshiro (CHK) *2 # toughness bonus to snakes
@@ -1,10 +1,5 @@
 #NAME:AshenmoorCohort
 #
 #DESC: Creature's Decks 13:
 #DESC: "The deck that an Ashenmoor Cohort
 #DESC: would (and could) assemble"
 #DESC: (v1.01)
 #DESC:
 #DESC: How does it feel
 #DESC: to be dead
 #DESC: I hear you ask?
@@ -1,14 +1,9 @@
-#NAME:Noble Panther
+#NAME:Noble Predators
 #
-#DESC: Creature's Decks 14:
+#DESC:"We are hunters.
 #DESC: "The deck that a Noble Panther
 #DESC: would (and could) assemble"
 #DESC: (v1.01)
 #DESC:
 #DESC: We are hunters.
 #DESC: You are prey.
 #DESC: Now run
-#DESC: So that we can catch you.
+#DESC: So that we can catch you."
 Noble Panther (INV)     *4 # 29 furious feline friends
 Horned Cheetah (INV)    *4 # lifelink
@@ -1,6 +1,13 @@
 #NAME:Treefolk
 #DESC:
 #DESC:Who's hiding in the tree?
 #DESC:
 #DESC:These trees have withstood
 #DESC:the anger of the elements
 #DESC:for ages.
 #DESC:Do you really think
 #DESC:you have the slightest chance
 #DESC:to even scratch their bark?
 Forest (M10) *24
 Timber Protector (LRW) *4
 #{4}{G} ; Creature — Treefolk Warrior (4/6); Other Treefolk creatures you control get +1/+1. Other Treefolk and Forests you control are indestructible.
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 #NAME:Dragons
 #DESC:Dragons are rage
-#DESC:of power and will
+#DESC:of power and will.
 #DESC:Dragons are artists 
 #DESC:with flames, 
 #DESC:painting the world 
-#DESC:with fire
+#DESC:with fire.
 #Land
 Mountain (M10) *24
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 #NAME:Badlands
 #DESC:Dangerous foes await you.
-#DESC:Both Undead, Goblins and other
+#DESC:Both undead, goblins, and
-#DESC:Abominations will fight you 
+#DESC:other abominations will
-#DESC:recklessly.
+#DESC:fight you recklessly.
 #Ankh of Mishra
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 1094
@@ -1,9 +1,12 @@
 #NAME:Millage
-#DESC:"The distance between insanity
+#DESC:"You may think that you have
-#DESC: and genius is measured only
+#DESC: a rich repository
-#DESC: by success."  (Bruce Feirstein)
+#DESC: of spells and artifacts and
-#DESC:
+#DESC: creatures.
-#DESC:v1.0 2009 10 01
+#DESC: But before you know it,
 #DESC: all your possessions
 #DESC: will crumble
 #DESC: in your hands."
 Wrath of God (10E) *4
 Damnation (PLC) *4
 Evacuation (10E) *3
@@ -1,4 +1,16 @@
 #NAME:Mindwracked
 #DESC:"What was it, what was it ... I know
 #DESC: there was something I wanted to tell
 #DESC: you. Or was it something you wanted
 #DESC: to tell me? Ah, why can't I remember?
 #DESC: I know it was important! Or wasn't it?
 #DESC:
 #DESC: What am I thinking about here? And
 #DESC: are these actually my own thoughts?
 #DESC: Who am I anyway? Any who are *you*?
 #DESC: Ah, never mind. I'll just kill you.
 #DESC:
 #DESC: You're disrupting my thoughts."
 Izzet Signet (GPT)           * 4 #
 Gelectrode (GPT)             * 4 #
 Wee Dragonauts (GPT)         * 4 #
@@ -1,4 +1,14 @@
-#NAME:Vampires
+#NAME:VampireViscounts
 #DESC:Oh to sink one's teeth
 #DESC:into the warm softness
 #DESC:of pulsating flesh!
 #DESC:
 #DESC:Oh to drink the liquor
 #DESC:of life and passion
 #DESC:fresh from the source!
 #DESC:
 #DESC:Can it be a sin
 #DESC:to revel in such bliss?
 Dark Ritual (RV)             * 2 #
 Arrogant Vampire (POR)       * 4 #
 Vampiric Feast (POR)         * 2 #
@@ -6,7 +16,7 @@ Vampiric Touch (POR)         * 2 #
 Stalking Bloodsucker (ODY)   * 1 #
 Skeletal Vampire (GPT)       * 1 #
 Ascendant Evincar (10E)      * 2 #
-Vampiric link (PLC)          * 3 #
+Vampiric Link (PLC)          * 3 #
 Swamp (ALA)                  * 4 #
 Swamp (ALA)                  * 4 #
 Vampire's Bite (ZEN)         * 3 #
@@ -1,4 +1,11 @@
 #NAME:Disciplination
 #DESC:"Unfortunately, my army
 #DESC: has not managed to survive
 #DESC: certain disciplinary measures
 #DESC: that I was sadly forced to take.
 #DESC: But I see that you
 #DESC: have brought me reinforcements.
 #DESC: How very nice of you. Thanks!"
 Paralyze (RV)                * 3 #
 Moat (LEG)                   * 4 #
 Light of Day (TMP)           * 1 #
@@ -1,4 +1,9 @@
 #NAME:Red Cats
 #DESC:Ferocious predators
 #DESC:descend from the mountains,
 #DESC:lured down
 #DESC:by the sweet smell
 #DESC:of your fighters' cold sweat.
 Sabretooth Tiger (ICE)       * 4 #
 Raging Cougar (POR)          * 4 #
 Canyon Wildcat (TMP)         * 4 #
@@ -1,4 +1,10 @@
 #NAME:Enchanted Coatl
 #DESC:Beware! The enchantresses
 #DESC:have found a new pet!
 #DESC:And they enjoy to make it
 #DESC:stronger and stronger
 #DESC:until no defender
 #DESC:can stop it.
 Flight (RV)                  * 2 #
 Fastbond (RV)                * 1 #
 Instill Energy (RV)          * 1 #
@@ -1,4 +1,7 @@
-#NAME:Black Coffers
+#NAME:Wraith's Feast
 #DESC:"My army may intimidate you,
 #DESC: but it is my hunger for life
 #DESC: that will kill you."
 Dark Ritual (RV)             * 4 #
 Drain Life (RV)              * 4 #
 Cabal Coffers (TOR)          * 4 #
@@ -1,4 +1,18 @@
 #NAME:Bloodhall Ooze
 #DESC:"Note about specimen 114:
 #DESC: After being nourished by living
 #DESC: and decaying organic matter,
 #DESC: the ooze has grown to proportions
 #DESC: we never fathomed.
 #DESC: Actually, when I look at its
 #DESC: raging tentacles slapping
 #DESC: relentlessly against the glassy
 #DESC: wall of its prison, I wonder if
 #DESC: it might not eventually become a
 #DESC: security risk for this labo..."
 #DESC:         (scrap of paper found among the
 #DESC:            slimy ruins of the mages' lab)
 Kird Ape (RV)                * 4 #
 Forest (10E)                 *13 #
 Mountain (10E)               *11 #
@@ -1,4 +1,11 @@
 #NAME:Persistence
 #DESC:See your whole army
 #DESC:fall victim
 #DESC:to wrath and damnation
 #DESC:while we persist
 #DESC:and survive
 #DESC:to strike you
 #DESC:when you are defenseless.
 Wrath of God (RV)            * 4 #
 Damnation (PLC)              * 4 #
 Kitchen Finks (SHM)          * 4 #
@@ -1,4 +1,10 @@
 #NAME:No Bushwhacker
 #DESC:"Attack! Heal! Attack! Heal!
 #DESC: And again and again and again.
 #DESC: Oh, how I miss my days
 #DESC: in the goblin army!
 #DESC: There, I never had to do
 #DESC: TWO things in a battle!"
 Swords to Plowshares (ICE)   * 4 #
 Akki Raider (BOK)            * 4 #
 Lightning Helix (RAV)        * 4 #
@@ -1,4 +1,8 @@
-#NAME:Tarmac 
+#NAME:Tarmac
 #DESC:How does it feel
 #DESC:being stripped to the rack
 #DESC:while Tarmogoyf licks
 #DESC:the soles of your feet?
 The Rack (RV)                * 4 #
 Hymn to Tourach (FEM)        * 4 #
 Darksteel Ingot (DST)        * 3 #
@@ -1,4 +1,12 @@
 #NAME:Enchantresses
 #DESC:Fear the might
 #DESC:of the Enchantresses!
 #DESC:If you don't take care,
 #DESC:they will fire
 #DESC:a barrage of spells
 #DESC:while growing
 #DESC:to powerful warriors
 #DESC:themselves.
 Web (RV)                     * 4 #
 Wall of Blossoms (STH)       * 4 #
 Argothian Enchantress (USG)  * 4 #
@@ -1,4 +1,8 @@
 #NAME:Slightly Sligh
 #DESC:The Mogg are loose!
 #DESC:And they come
 #DESC:with some powerful spells
 #DESC:too!
 Mogg Conscripts (TMP)        * 4 #
 Mogg Flunkies (STH)          * 4 #
 Flame Rift (NMS)             * 2 #
@@ -1,4 +1,16 @@
 #NAME:Barbarians
 #DESC: Being a barbarian can be really,
 #DESC: really hard. People think that all
 #DESC: we are interested in is to spit out
 #DESC: primitive threats like "Me barbarian!
 #DESC: Me not like your face!", and then
 #DESC: brutally crush the next best guy.
 #DESC: 
 #DESC: This is is outrageously wrong! We can
 #DESC: actually speak full sentences before
 #DESC: we brutally crush the next best guy.
 #DESC:                (Ugh Skullcrusher,
 #DESC:                 Barbarian Philosopher)
 Keldon Warlord (RV)          * 4 #
 Balduvian Barbarians (ICE)   * 4 #
 Balduvian War-Makers (ALL)   * 3 #
@@ -1,4 +1,9 @@
 #NAME:Token Terror
 #DESC:"Beware!
 #DESC: they come from everywhere!"
 #DESC:
 #DESC:Meet a diverse army
 #DESC:drafted by unusual means.
 Swords to Plowshares (ICE)   * 4 #
 Raise the Alarm (MRD)        * 4 #
 Plains (MRD)                 * 7 #
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 #NAME:Blind Faith
 #DESC:"No more Dark and Light
-#DESC:for it is one that we fight"
+#DESC: for it is one that we fight"
 Unholy Strength (RV)         * 2 #
 Holy Strength (RV)           * 2 #
 Silent Attendant (USG)       * 2 #
@@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
 #NAME:Plane ofthe Apes
-#DESC:A plane where apes evolved from men?
+#DESC:A plane where apes
 #DESC:evolved from men?
 #DESC:There's got to be an answer!
 Tree Monkey (P02) *4
 Kird Ape (RV) *4
@@ -1,4 +1,8 @@
 #NAME:Balefire Blast
 #DESC:"Order and chaos
 #DESC: can be united
 #DESC: by the raw power
 #DESC: of pure fanaticism."
 Boros Swiftblade (RAV)       * 4 #
 Lightning Helix (RAV)        * 4 #
 Boros Recruit (RAV)          * 4 #
@@ -1,8 +1,17 @@
 #NAME:Life & Death
 #DESC:"Life causes death.
 #DESC: Death provides the basis
 #DESC: for new life.
 #DESC:
 #DESC: Life and Death do not contradict,
 #DESC: but complement each other.
 #DESC:
 #DESC: Understanding their interaction
 #DESC: is the secret of our strength."
 Dark Ritual (RV)             * 4 #
 Righteous War (VIS)          * 4 #
 Vindicate (APC)              * 4 #
-Mountain (RAV)               *11 #
+Swamp (RAV)                  *11 #
 Plains (RAV)                 *11 #
 Mourning Thrull (GPT)        * 4 #
 Nip Gwyllion (EVE)           * 4 #
@@ -1,4 +1,7 @@
 #NAME:Thistlestings
 #DESC:Meet a more mystical tribe
 #DESC:of Kithkin. Will you allow
 #DESC:them to confuse you?
 Wings of Aesthir (ICE)       * 4 #
 Wings of Hope (INV)          * 4 #
 Plains (INV)                 *12 #
@@ -1,4 +1,8 @@
 #NAME:Creaky Wood
 #DESC:"Death has always been
 #DESC: a part of nature.
 #DESC: We embrace it
 #DESC: to enhance our power."
 Llanowar Dead (APC)          * 4 #
 Ebony Treefolk (APC)         * 4 #
 Putrefy (RAV)                * 4 #
@@ -1,4 +1,7 @@
 #NAME:Saproling Surge
 #DESC:A wiggling, squirming mass
 #DESC:of fungal matter
 #DESC:will overgrow your army.
 Verdant Force (TMP)          * 2 #
 Gaea's Cradle (USG)          * 2 #
 Spontaneous Generation (MRQ) * 2 #
@@ -1,4 +1,8 @@
 #NAME:Boar's Tusks
 #DESC:Prepare to meet an army
 #DESC:of mighty creatures
 #DESC:harnessing the power
 #DESC:of fire and nature alike.
 Sunastian Falconer (LEG)     * 1 #
 Rock Basilisk (MIR)          * 1 #
 Viashivan Dragon (VIS)       * 1 #
@@ -1,4 +1,7 @@
 #NAME:Air Sea Battle
 #DESC:Meet the darker side
 #DESC:of fairies
 #DESC:and merfolk.
 Sleeper's Robe (INV)         * 4 #
 Shadowmage Infiltrator (ODY) * 3 #
 Gravelgill Axeshark (SHM)    * 3 #
@@ -1,7 +1,11 @@
 #NAME:The Memorial
-#DESC:What would you do?
+#DESC:What will you do
-#DESC:When you are facing
+#DESC:when you are facing
-#DESC:an army of Supermen?
+#DESC:an army of super-beings?
 #DESC:
 #DESC:Worshipping the Memorial
 #DESC:gives them powers
 #DESC:beyond comprehension.
 Pendelhaven (LEG)            * 1 #
 Urborg (LEG)                 * 1 #
 Fyndhorn Elves (ICE)         * 4 #
@@ -1,4 +1,10 @@
 #NAME:White Blades
 #DESC:Meet a complete army
 #DESC:of soldiers, knights, and guards.
 #DESC:
 #DESC:Can you stop them,
 #DESC:or will you just stand aside
 #DESC:and watch in awe?
 Steppe Lynx (ZEN)            * 3 #
 Akrasan Squire (ALA)         * 4 #
 Day of Judgment (ZEN)        * 3 #
@@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
 #NAME:Twin Pricks
-#DESC:vampire tribe
+#DESC:"The cattle has arrived.
 #DESC: Time to feed ..."
 Bad Moon (RV)                * 4 #
 Terror (RV)                  * 3 #
 Swamp (RV)                   *16 #
@@ -1,9 +1,11 @@
 #Mill /Artifact Game for AI
 #NAME:Inquisitor
-#DESC:Black vises in Ivory Towers await you
+#DESC:Black vises in Ivory Towers
-#DESC:when facing this artificially created army,
+#DESC:await you, when facing
-#DESC:designed to completely stop your progress
+#DESC:this artificially created army,
-#DESC:and then torture you to death.
+#DESC:designed to completely stop
 #DESC:your progress, and then
 #DESC:torture you to death.
 #4x Howling Mine
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@@ -1,4 +1,7 @@
 #NAME:Destroy
 #DESC:I will destroy your lands
 #DESC:and then your army
 #DESC:and then you.
 Black Vise (RV)              * 4 #
 Black Knight (RV)            * 2 #
 Dark Ritual (RV)             * 4 #
@@ -1,4 +1,13 @@
 #NAME:Goblin Spike
 #DESC:"Huh? Waddarya yellin, mage?
 #DESC: Can't understand ya
 #DESC: with all that spell firing
 #DESC: going on!
 #DESC: Wait, lemme read your lips.
 #DESC: 'Get ... get ... aw... awhat?"
 #DESC:
 #DESC: (last words of a goblin warrior,
 #DESC:  moments before being incinerated)
 Goblin Balloon Brigade (RV)  * 3 #
 Goblin Soothsayer (MIR)      * 4 #
 Mob Justice (STH)            * 4 #
@@ -1,5 +1,9 @@
 #NAME:Skies of Emeria
-#DESC:All Land-Walkers Beware!
+#DESC:All land-walkers beware!
 #DESC:None shall pass on foot
 #DESC:into our realm,
 #DESC:and all who enter by other means
 #DESC:shall be repelled.
 Serra Angel (RV)             * 4 #
 Karakas (LEG)                * 1 #
 Zephid (USG)                 * 1 #
@@ -1,4 +1,9 @@
 #NAME:Red Green Ally
 #DESC:"We may not be alike,
 #DESC: but we share a common goal.
 #DESC: All opposition will falter
 #DESC: when the piper
 #DESC: begins her tune."
 Mountain (10E)               * 2 #
 Primal Rage (10E)            * 3 #
 Mountain (LRW)               *10 #
@@ -1,4 +1,10 @@
 #NAME: Allied Warriors
 #DESC:"Unity in diversity
 #DESC: is our strength"
 #DESC:
 #DESC:Meet an army of allies
 #DESC:from the mountains,
 #DESC:forests, seas, and skies.
 Utopia Tree (INV)            * 4 #
 Turntimber Ranger (ZEN)      * 2 #
 Oran-Rief Survivalist (ZEN)  * 4 #
@@ -1,4 +1,10 @@
 #NAME:Traveling Party
 #DESC:We may look
 #DESC:like any other party
 #DESC:of adventurers.
 #DESC:But you have no idea
 #DESC:how much help we can get
 #DESC:if we need to.
 Swords to Plowshares (ICE)   * 4 #
 Glorious Anthem (10E)        * 4 #
 Spectral Procession (SHM)    * 4 #
@@ -2,6 +2,12 @@
 #DESC:"Alone we are weak, 
 #DESC: but together
 #DESC: we are unstoppable."
 #DESC:
 #DESC:If you thought that
 #DESC:it won't be possible
 #DESC:to combine three elements
 #DESC:into a single powerful force
 #DESC:- think again!
 Swords to Plowshares (RV)    * 4 #
 Turntimber Ranger (ZEN)      * 4 #
 Oran-Rief Survivalist (ZEN)  * 4 #
@@ -1,4 +1,6 @@
 #NAME:Hot & Hasty
 #DESC:"Our heat will burn you
 #DESC: before you can even move!"
 Breath of Darigaaz (INV)     * 4 #
 Rorix Bladewing (ONS)        * 3 #
 Slith Firewalker (MRD)       * 4 #
@@ -1,4 +1,9 @@
 #NAME:Vanguard'sChosen
 #DESC:Watch the vanguard!
 #DESC:How its strength rises
 #DESC:and rises
 #DESC:and rises
 #DESC:until nothing can stop it!
 Pendelhaven (LEG)            * 2 #
 Fyndhorn Elves (ICE)         * 3 #
 Elvish Vanguard (ONS)        * 4 #
@@ -1,5 +1,9 @@
 #NAME:Tree Planter
-Aspect of Wolf (RV)          * 4 #
+#DESC:If you don't come to the forest,
 #DESC:the forest will come to you.
 #DESC:
 #DESC:But the trees we plant today
 #DESC:are the armors we wear tomorrow.
 Nature's Lore (POR)          * 4 #
 Titania's Chosen (USG)       * 3 #
 Forest (CHK)                 * 5 #
@@ -17,3 +21,7 @@ Blanchwood Armor (10E)       * 4 #
 Oversoul of Dusk (SHM)       * 1 #
 Farhaven Elf (SHM)           * 3 #
 Wilt-Leaf Cavaliers (SHM)    * 3 #
 #Taken out, AI casts it on opponent's creatures
 #Aspect of Wolf (RV)          * 4 #
 Fists of Ironwood (RAV)      * 4 #
@@ -1,5 +1,10 @@
 #NAME:Elfolk
-#DESC:Elf-folk, get it!?
+#DESC:Meet a combined force
 #DESC:of elves and treefolk.
 #DESC:Can you withstand
 #DESC:the standing power of the trees
 #DESC:and the fertility of the elves
 #DESC:at the same time?
 Living Lands (RV)            * 2 #
 Eladamri, Lord of Leaves (TMP) * 2 #
 Treefolk Seedlings (USG)     * 4 #
@@ -1,4 +1,11 @@
 #NAME:Mighty Murk
 #DESC:Led by the Murkfiend
 #DESC:creatures of the forest
 #DESC:and the skies and seas
 #DESC:will attack your army.
 #DESC:
 #DESC:Don't underestimate
 #DESC:their potential for growth.
 Assault Zeppelid (DIS)       * 3 #
 Trygon Predator (DIS)        * 4 #
 Simic Sky Swallower (DIS)    * 1 #
@@ -1,4 +1,8 @@
 #NAME:Mermadness
 #DESC:The tricksters of the sea
 #DESC:are now conquering all the realms
 #DESC:with their never-ending supply
 #DESC:of fighters and spells.
 Lord of Atlantis (RV)        * 4 #
 Merfolk of the Pearl Trident (RV) * 2 #
 River Merfolk (FEM)          * 1 #
@@ -1,4 +1,8 @@
 #NAME:Death
 #DESC:Lavishly we're sowing
 #DESC:Death and demise
 #DESC:When the battle is won
 #DESC:we can harvest the corpses.
 Paralyze (RV)                * 2 #
 Will-o'-the-Wisp (RV)        * 2 #
 Spirit of the Night (MIR)    * 1 #
@@ -1,5 +1,11 @@
-#NAME:Enchanted 
+#NAME:Enchanted
-Primal Frenzy (ODY) (10E)    * 4 #
+#DESC:Beware when any of the fighters
 #DESC:dons the armor
 #DESC:or the mask.
 #DESC:
 #DESC:Outfitted well
 #DESC:they will become invincible.
 Primal Frenzy (ODY)          * 4 #
 Blanchwood Armor (USG)       * 4 #
 Ancestral Mask (MRQ)         * 4 #
 Spidersilk Armor (MRQ)       * 4 #
@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
 #NAME:Corruption
-#DESC:It is said that power corrupts,
+#DESC:We will ruin you.
-#DESC:but actually it's more true
+#DESC:We will corrupt you.
-#DESC:that power attracts the
+#DESC:We will unmake you.
 #DESC:corruptible.
 #DESC:The sane are usually attracted
 #DESC:by other things than power.
 #DESC:
-#DESC:David Brin
+#DESC:And when there's nothing left of you
 #DESC:but a dead and hollow husk
 #DESC:the fairies will dance in celebration
 #DESC:over your remains.
 Bad Moon (RV)                * 4 #
 Nature's Ruin (POR)          * 4 #
 Virtue's Ruin (POR)          * 2 #
@@ -1,4 +1,11 @@
 #NAME:Rack them all
 #DESC:Notch by notch
 #DESC:I turn the wheel
 #DESC:stretching your bonded limbs.
 #DESC:
 #DESC:There is nothing you can do.
 #DESC:You might as well surrender
 #DESC:right away.
 The Rack (RV)                * 4 #
 Bad Moon (RV)                * 4 #
 Dark Ritual (RV)             * 4 #
@@ -1,5 +1,12 @@
 #NAME:SilverBlade
-#DESC:White Weenie Aggro Deck
+#DESC:Don't worry -
 #DESC:it will not hurt ... much.
 #DESC:
 #DESC:Hounds and spirits,
 #DESC:lynx and soldiers
 #DESC:will have ripped you apart
 #DESC:before you even noticed
 #DESC:their presence.
 Crusade (RV)                 * 4 #
 Swords to Plowshares (RV)    * 4 #
 Karakas (LEG)                * 1 #
@@ -1,4 +1,8 @@
 #NAME:Eviscerator
 #DESC:If you move, you'll hurt yourself.
 #DESC:
 #DESC:Of course, if you don't move
 #DESC:I will hurt you too.
 Ankh of Mishra (RV)          * 4 #
 Black Vise (RV)              * 4 #
 Wheel of Fortune (RV)        * 1 #